jab bhi is dil ne usko chaha hai
har baar maine ne use samjhaya hai
door rehne ki koshish karta hoon bahut
phir bhi dil usi ki taraf kheenca chala jata hai
jab bhi woh gum mein rehti hai
dil mera kyon rota hai
woh humesha mujhe tukhrati hai
phir bhi yeh dil usi keliye tadap tha hai
har baar aisa kyon hota hain
yeh dil tu kyon dhadakta hain
Written after getting Inspired from Javed Akhtar's shayari in Zindagi Mile Na Dobara :-)
har baar maine ne use samjhaya hai
door rehne ki koshish karta hoon bahut
phir bhi dil usi ki taraf kheenca chala jata hai
jab bhi woh gum mein rehti hai
dil mera kyon rota hai
woh humesha mujhe tukhrati hai
phir bhi yeh dil usi keliye tadap tha hai
har baar aisa kyon hota hain
yeh dil tu kyon dhadakta hain
Written after getting Inspired from Javed Akhtar's shayari in Zindagi Mile Na Dobara :-)
Good Start!! :) Nice one :)
ReplyDeleteYeah!, Its good
ReplyDeleteBut I thought You never watch movies and how you are inspired?
Thanks Akku....
ReplyDeleteThanks ra Paplesh..... correctey.. but sometimes I do watch few movies ;)
good attempt :)-aparna
ReplyDeleteThanks Aparna :-)
ReplyDeleteHey Sri,,, thats a really coool start.... lovely wordings.... :-)
ReplyDeletePiece of shit like Iyer can write this and you call yourself as philosophers.
ReplyDeleteHow come your love on eclipse is lost and your love on poetry increasing.Is this change because of any one in your life.
ReplyDeletePawan
thanks All, that's a weirdest comment I have ever received Baseer but still I love it :)
ReplyDelete@Pawan: Eclipse got eclipsed so just looking at other places for sunlight :)